Thanks a ton for the evaluation, and you're exactly right. I was so focused on building a back story that I didn't think to write in character flaws to the application. If I'm accepted, it'll definitely come into play when we're all writing the journals.
Also, "1/10 moustache description" lel...
Realistically, an RTS is just what is actually happening but slowed down and paused. So really, in the same action the muton may run to cover there probably wouldn't be more than a few seconds when the assault sprints up and shoots. And misses, I assume could be attributed to nerves, or even say...
First Name: Peter
Last Name: Briggs
Gender: Male
Nationality: English
Military Rank: Lance Corporal, British Army.
Race: Caucasian
Age: 23
Height: 5'10
Weight: 185lbs
Biographical Synopsis: Born in England, just over twenty-three years ago, Peter's family wasn't exactly well off. He didn't...