Since people seem to be critiquing apps. Could anyone read mine and see what they think. (It's on page five) I think it needed more details, but is a story that doesn't seem to far fetched.
First Name: Etienne (Born Steven)
Last Name: Renault ( Born Miller)
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Race: Caucasian
Hair Color: Brown
Biographical Synopsis: Born Steven Miller, on January 10, 1985 to a middle class family in Smithtown New York. At age ten his mother was killed in a car as she was...