ZombieSplitter53

ZombieSplitter53

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  • Sharkdragon96
    Oh my god! I just had an idea for a curtail character moment for Persephone, but it involves this Charles McAfree person you and Prismacube brought up in that last entry if that's alright with you and him. It pretty much involves him getting the crap kicked out of him by Persephone after he tried to move in on her!
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    Sharkdragon96
    Sharkdragon96
    I'm probably going to post a regular journal entry first but then I'm going to write her encounter with him in another one of those screenplay formats like I did with Persephone and Ayame in the shooting range.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    Sure, sure. Just let me know if you need anything.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    By the way, you can assume the guy is the kind of person that wouldn't hesitate to say everything that happened with Ayame and exaggerate, as perverted creeps like that usually do.
    Dahlexpert
    ou and axton will be smack talking Ayame.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    That's fine. As long as he doesn't push any of her sensitive buttons, she's always up for some verbal jousting.
    Dahlexpert
    I wanna have Axton challenge Ayame to a shooting game,how will she react to it.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    She'd accept. She always likes a good challenge.
    Dahlexpert
    Dahlexpert
    ou he will challenge her all right,he was told to never underestimate an opponent,so he will not hold back just because she is small and a girl.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    She'll try her hardest and give him a run for his money, though he'll likely come out on top, have a lot more experience with firearms then her.
    Sharkdragon96
    Hey! I'm going to be working on another post tomorrow morning but I was thinking the day after if not earlier I thought I'd write a personal conversation between Persephone and Ayame if that were okay with you.
    Majora098
    Can John follow Ayame and talk with her, I think it would help expand the incident, and It really help characterize John when he's not nervous when He isn't nervous, you can say no if you don't like the Idea
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    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    She'd be in a state of shock, on the verge of hyperventilating. This would be one of the few cases where she'd be too upset to be scared of men. Honestly, the fact that John knows what it like to be afraid of how people would react to you saying the wrong thing, he'd know best how to talk her down.
    Majora098
    Majora098
    posted tell me if anything needs to be changed
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    That was absolutely beautiful. Seriously, thank you, it really helps me further my story. I hope John won't mind too much if Ayame starts to warm up to him after this.
    Sharkdragon96
    So wait, were you thinking our first encounter with each other would be written from your side or my side?
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    That depends. If you want to write it, be my guest. Otherwise, let me know what kind of person Persephone is, how she converses with other women and what her personality is like, and I'll write it.
    Sharkdragon96
    Sharkdragon96
    For the time being she's very cautious about conversing with other people, she doesn't want to run the risk of getting too emotionally attached to anyone as a friend for fear of losing them in the field. If you approach her first she's going to be very hesitant, so I'd definitely recommend starting with small talk.
    Majora098
    Posted my side, tell me if anything is wrong
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    That was good. In fact, I can use it to lead into Ayame coming out to Anna, which I was planning on doing very soon.
    Majora098
    Majora098
    Yay, Unintentional plot advancement!
    Majora098
    Can I write Ayame's apology or do you want to?
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    I got it. I need to have her do a bit of work, to try and salvage her image. However, since I have a lot of people to talk to, please feel free to elaborate on the situation after my post.
    Majora098
    Majora098
    ok
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    Its up now, so feel free to do you own thing. I'm sure you have an idea of how Ayame is, just remember that while she is still temperamental and skittish, she is genuinely trying to apologize.
    Dahlexpert
    Hay zombie splitter53, I wan't Axton to kinda apologize to Ayame how will she react to it
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    I'm writing a posr where Ayame apologizes to some other people. If you make a post where Axton says he's going to say he is sorry, I'll mention him appologizing in my post tomorrow.
    Dahlexpert
    Dahlexpert
    OK,that will work
    Brycart
    Posted, let me know if you want anything changed.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    Honestly, that was perfect, and I'm not even exaggerating. The way you portrayed Ayame as skittish without sounding bitchy, the way Joel complimented her with it sounding patronizing, and the way he was able to talk past her defensiveness. I hope the two of the will converse again soon.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    Without it sounding patronizing is what I meant.
    Brycart
    Brycart
    Thanks, really appreciate it.
    Brycart
    My character, Joel, is about to go to the shooting range and i noticed Ayame said she is too. Was wondering if you could write up some kind of encounter, or i could if you want.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    You can write one if you want. Just remember that Ayame is skittish around men, has a Napoleon Complex, and has been trained in handguns, and has become quite irritated with the rumor floating around that she's not.
    Jhon Markith
    you did great making my guy sound like I wanted, and you did great making every thing in the fight sound real.
    I also would like to see if stevie, ayame, and anna meet some were to... um... make up for what happened.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    Thank, I put a lot of effort into my posts. As far as making up goes, give it a llittle time, we will get there.
    Dahlexpert
    Yo Zombiesplitter53, I wanna have Axton continue training Ayame in using different weapons, but I want your permission first, before I write any more training journals.
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    That' s very nice of you, but as said before, she is already trained in firearms, she avoids weapons with a lot of recoil, but she knows how to use them and can do so if need be.
    Jhon Markith
    I hope I didn't over do any thing in the lunch room incident
    ZombieSplitter53
    ZombieSplitter53
    What do you mean? You bumped into Ayame, a simple mistake, and she over-reacted. You didn't over do anything. Remember that when I make a post, I'm "in character". If you ever do anything wrong, I'll ask you to change something on your profile page (and trust me, you will here from me if that happens).
    Jhon Markith
    Jhon Markith
    sure thing
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