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XCOM ENGINEERING//RECRUITMENT PERSONNEL FILES First Name: Taliken Last Name: Flatliner Gender: Male Age: 21 Biographical Synopsis: When XCOM ASIA took a look into his government files, they found the biography of a fairly dedicated engineer working for the ZVEZDA-HOSHI Space Program between...

Uh...sorry, I got ahead of myself

I believe that your character's application is well written. It is informative, personal, and gives us an idea of his personality. However, I believe you could have added onto the personal touch of your application by including more distinctive data on him, like a special date(quoting the...

First, thanks for reviewing my character application, I appreciate it. Second, my reasoning behind putting her application in a 3rd person perspective of itself and not going into details from HER perspective is because of the way I see how XCOM recruits their operatives. I don't think they have...

Thank you for the review!

I know everyone's busy, but could someone spare some time to make a critique of my character? On page 7. I really think I could have improved it somehow, but I feel like I'm missing some key understandings in order to realize it.

XCOM Candidate Personnel Files//Recruit Designation: #124 First Name: Ashika Last Name: Ketsuin Nickname: Star Lioness(when earned) Sex: Female Age: 18 Nationality: Japanese-American Born: Matsue, Shimane Prefecture Height: 152 cm Weight: 40 kg BWH: 76-53-74 Blood Type: O Education...