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Got one in myself. I hope you all enjoy. My characters' takes on current events. I have another solo planned. I might get to it today, but if I don't, I promise you'll see it tomorrow.

To Save, To Stop, We Stand United Onboard the Avenger Holo-Training Room Alexis huffed and heaved, desperately trying to catch her breath as she tried, just as desperately, to withstand the blows against her shield. It wasn't a holographic foe she was fighting today but rather Ayame, and an...

A rare treat!:D

That makes her Even more dangerous. Being motivated by bloodlust to boot makes her a scary opponent indeed.

Quite the interesting read. Seeing Azazel plays devil's advocate on the other side is quite interesting and inspiring in fact. It would motivate me to write something more with my Elder... if I wasn't already planning it to begin with.

I'm sorry. I wasn't trying to imply I thought you did something wrong. As I said, I was more disappointed in myself, not you. I did have a... small question. Was Vekinte's talk with Desmond implied to have happened off screen? Or did Patrem create Ember before his father had his convincing...

I thought the ones for mine were all well done. I wish Ayame has been mentioned too, but you technically mentioned most of my other characters, and I wouldn't want to be greedy.

Atka's sadness fills me with more sadness. Though... I... the final post was really good. Don't think otherwise. I just... wish I had been a part of it. You might recall that I, an in universe, Joe, called what was going to happen, and I feel he should have been a part of that, no matter how...

Pernicious Provocation This one is just scary. Thinking of the damage she could do, especially since so many of XCOM's people can't... or won't... give her their all... people will die...

Crimson Sunset Chilling. Absolutely chilling. And the figurative destruction of who Yakone is was beautifully written and glorious in a heart wrenching way.

Protégé Very unnerving to hear such talk and see such power in one that is esentially still a child. Liked the mention of a familiar Ethereal name. And the solar system thing was really cool.

“Resolve”(Part 3) An incredible conclusion to the fight, and a clever twist. Though it leaves me wondering if that poor man left with a concussion was in on the whole thing. Of not, I would be piiiiissed in his possition.

“Resolve”(Part 2) When I first read this part, I was thinking things were going too well, which was a sign that it was going to fail. Then the witch showed up and I knew the easy part was over.

“Resolve”(Part 1) Yakone did an excellent job arguing XCOM's side considering her position and the defenses given by her opponent. At the risk of opening up an ethical debate, I would have made three more points had I been in Yakone's shoes; 1) It is argued that a false electoral system is as...

As I said before, I'm rereading several posts, and giving them the attention my sulleness couldn't provide before, and maybe give some commentary they deserve. First up is Testing the Waters. All I can really say is it was pleasant. An enjoyable read that makes two people who just met seem like...

I want to mention the last several posts have been amazing, and I have loved each of them very much. I am glad to see Gem's strive to expand the story through his solos is strong even as he balances collabs, missions, and is school/social life. He has surpassed me by quite a bit compared to the...

I have another idea for a solo. No promises for today, though. Possibly tomorrow. Today was been awful and it's only 10 o'clock. I just want to go home, curl up in my bed, and sleep forever right now.

Loved them of course. I'm glad to see you're getting in the writhing spirit again. Welcome back, friend.

Good mission. Very nice. Nice to give Tomislav some love. You might be tired of the DBZ comparisons, but I can't help it here. Yakone and Tomislav remind me of the main character of a story (Yakone) who is incapacitated for a time, and we switch over to a new main character (Tom), like Goku...

There you guys go. Short but (hopefully) sweet. To get a good grasp on Veronica's personality, think of her and Joe as two sides of the same personality. Joe is the more grounded and serious side, Vicky the more free and eccentric side. Either on their own can go too far to their extreme, but...