Terra Dolor: OOC Discussion & Think Tank

ZombieSplitter53

Game Master
Staff member
Now you may be asking yourself, Marine, why are you posting a solo at 3:30 in the morning, and my simple explanation is fuck the police.

I would like comments on this one because obviously I do not write for myself, I write for audience and their feedback. It is boring not being commented on. So don't bore me...

You.

Bastards.

...And by bastards I mean Dahl, cause fuck that cunt, am I right? Yeah... fuck 'em. And none of that homoerotica shit Gem, you faggot... get a life. Not everything is about assblasting another dude in his rectum hole, alright? Geez. Anyways... *sniff*... yeah. Love you all.
Go to bed, Marine, your drunk.

p.s., loved you solo. Always love them.
 

ZombieSplitter53

Game Master
Staff member
I do have to say, I am impressed by the eloquence Marine can write with in the middle of the night when he is likely dead tired. Like a drunken fighter, he is the exhausted writer.
 

MarineAvenger

Operator 21O
Staff member
That was awesome! I loved the detail you put into thr scene with Drayce, your choice of words made everything just sorta... Pop.

Now Devon's part was really good too, at first I didn't like how he essentially tortured that bartender. I was looking at it from a 'How would Betty feel' kinda lens and she wouldn't have liked that.

However that was befoee I realized he was after slavers, saving that poor girl was noble and Betty personally detests slavers, as do I.

Devon is a great 'Ends justify the means' character. He has no qualms about painting the walls red with blood of others to save a single innocent girl. While Betty would applaud his actions saving her, she would be quite unsure if that much rampant murder was really called for... I wonder though...

You seemed to imply that Devon was being paid for this... Would he have done the same out of the goodness of his heart I wonder?
For Drayce that pop was intended considering how his senses are in Dragon Mode.

Also Butch wasnt even the bartender. Just a patron.

As for rampant murder spree, it was sort of implied the all were coming after him and he had to act to complete his mission.

As for the goodness of his heart though... I will let you decide when more of his backstory is revealed. Just remember Davon does little for impulse. He was not paid with money though. He was paid with information, which is why he was after that wrapped up bundle. It holds something connected to his past. At the end I also wanted to show the philosophy of the mysterious guy who honestly all of you should have known who he was without naming him directly.
 

ZombieSplitter53

Game Master
Staff member
For Drayce that pop was intended considering how his senses are in Dragon Mode.

Also Butch wasnt even the bartender. Just a patron.

As for rampant murder spree, it was sort of implied the all were coming after him and he had to act to complete his mission.

As for the goodness of his heart though... I will let you decide when more of his backstory is revealed. Just remember Davon does little for impulse. He was not paid with money though. He was paid with information, which is why he was after that wrapped up bundle. It holds something connected to his past. At the end I also wanted to show the philosophy of the mysterious guy who honestly all of you should have known who he was without naming him directly.
He did what he did because he was happy to see those two together, but he is a businessman on a mission, and good deeds are even better when you walk away with something for yourself. ;)
 

Insane Darkness

Active Member
Hello everybody! I have uploaded 3 new RPs. They were all out of sync and unposted. I finally got them up on Gamigon... You're all welcome. :3
 

Insane Darkness

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ZombieSplitter53

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With Exo? Some needs to give that Netzi some grandchildren. Also good call Arlia, if Davon found out hell would have frozen over.
Thanks. Good to know someone read it. For anyone curious, Ed was married once. Where is his wife? Did he have any children? Grandchildren? Does anyone care about the pervy Beaver? Wouldn't you like to know...
 

DarkGemini24601

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Wow, so it's uh... come to my attention I haven't been active in a month on Terra Dolar. Sorry about that, guys. I'm still struggling to get my various story affairs in order, but I intend to put some stuff together within the next week at most. Apologies for the radio silence.

@Black0ut, that collab I'd meant to do before I went on vacation will still get done, although at this point I'll refer to it as having happened in the past probably. Or use the justification that my two knights had to go out on a job a good distance away from town. Zmby handed me something awhile ago that should be a suitable excuse for my absence either way...
 

ZombieSplitter53

Game Master
Staff member
Wow, so it's uh... come to my attention I haven't been active in a month on Terra Dolar. Sorry about that, guys. I'm still struggling to get my various story affairs in order, but I intend to put some stuff together within the next week at most. Apologies for the radio silence.

@Black0ut, that collab I'd meant to do before I went on vacation will still get done, although at this point I'll refer to it as having happened in the past probably. Or use the justification that my two knights had to go out on a job a good distance away from town. Zmby handed me something awhile ago that should be a suitable excuse for my absence either way...
You were on vacation. It's okay.
 
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