DarkGemini24601
Well-Known Member
Alright.
Creative Points
1. The fights - I loved how you managed things, from the outside defense force, to the Outsiders being triggered. The two turret Muton elites were awesome, as was the illusions, and the whole 'arena' feel of Luxuria's fight.
2. The captives - Gave me a sense of dread. Well done.
3. Luxuria - You have no idea how much I loved reading her parts. I read it aloud, and tried to play off the whole split voice thing. It was creepy, and perfect.
1. The fights - I loved how you managed things, from the outside defense force, to the Outsiders being triggered. The two turret Muton elites were awesome, as was the illusions, and the whole 'arena' feel of Luxuria's fight.
2. The captives - Gave me a sense of dread. Well done.
3. Luxuria - You have no idea how much I loved reading her parts. I read it aloud, and tried to play off the whole split voice thing. It was creepy, and perfect.